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Neighbourhoods will try to dream
While you and me we hold and lean
Onto bodies slick and charged
Together just one beating heart
All around us quiet now
We hear the leaves fall to the ground
Morning light upon our bed
An ally while I catch your breath

- "Sleep Tonight" by Stars


I fixed it so it's all in the same tense yaaay! (no more grammar fail!)

My first HiNaBN fanfic, yes? For my lovely fantastic ~katrani all the way. Light bondage? Check. Calling Zombie a girl's name? Check. Lots of run-ons? Check. Teasing about being so skinny? Check.

Microsoft Word like exploded on this. I think I killed spell check. With my run-ons and weird names. Do you like the names? I eventually resorted to random name generators. Wheeee.

And if it has a stray sentence in 1st person, tell me, that happened sometimes for some weird reason.

this must be the longest artist's comment i've ever written, wtf

Hanna is Not a Boy's Name! is (c) :iconvert-is-ninja: (I just mangle her characters)
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Oh, my! I love it!